Lord of the Vampires – Review
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It’s October and officially fall, my favorite season and one of my favorite months. Halloween is right around the corner and I’ve already stocked up on my fun size candy. There will be lots of book reviews featuring vampires, werewolves, ghosts and other creatures of the night. To kick it off, I have a review of Gena Showalter’s Lord of the Vampires. Happy haunting! |
Category: Adult Paranormal Romance
Keywords: Paranormal, vampires, romance, revenge
Format: Mass market paperback, eBook, audiobook
From goodreads:
Once upon a time…the Blood Sorcerer vanquished the kingdom of Elden. To save their children, the queen scattered them to safety and the king filled them with a need for vengeance. Only a magical timepiece connects the four royal heirs…and time is running out.
Nicolai the Vampire is renowned for his virility, but in a cruel twist of fate “The Dark Seducer” has become a sex slave in the kingdom of Delfina – stripped of his precious timepiece and memory. all that remains is a primal need for freedom, revenge – and the only woman who can help him.
When the wanton vampire summons Jane Parker, she is helpless to obey. She’s dawn to his dark sensuality and into his magical realm. But for this human, all is not a fairy tale. For saving Nicolai could mean losing the only man she’s ever craved…
Thuy’s review:
The king and queen of Elden are slain by the Blood Sorcerer in a bid for power. But before dying, they each cast a spell on their four children to help them survive. One spell got them to safety and the other instilled in them the need for vengeance. The first book is about Nicolai, crown prince of Elden. Nicolai takes after his father’s side of the family and is a blood drinker. He is also a notorious lover, bedding a different woman each night. In a cruel twist of fate, Nicolai finds himself as a sex slave to the cruel princess Odette. Having lost his memory, all he knows is that he has to escape and seek vengeance on the current king of Elden. To accomplish this he secretly casts a spell to bring back a human female, Jane, from another world to help him.
Let’s start with the good things about this book. The premise is interesting and original. Jane and Nicolai have great sexual chemistry. There’s plenty of fighting and action, in full bloody detail.
Now for the bad. Unfortunately this book just didn’t do it for me. I never felt a true emotional connection between the characters and, therefore, was never able to invest in their relationship. Nicolai’s plan is to use Jane to escape and then ditch her but he does an about face shortly after Jane appears. Suddenly all he can think is “Mine” and is willing to risk everything for her. Jane, likewise, is ready to risk her life for a man who kidnaps her and plans to leave her high and dry. She’s even ready to kill for him, offering to accompany him on his quest to murder the Blood Sorcerer. Though they get to know each other a little more as the story goes on, I still found myself puzzled over why they were drawn to each other.
I wanted to like Nicolai. I really did. Normally I love the dominant alpha male types. Unfortunately I didn’t find him very charismatic or memorable. Jane was interesting though not particularly compelling. She accepts her predicament way too easily, even for a scholar of fringe science. Her guilt over surviving a horrible car accident is an interesting facet but it’s never fully explored. And, while I admire her survival instincts, I find it hard to believe that she can make a hut from leaves, fashion tools from rocks and fell ogres after six months of self defense classes.
The dialogue also felt off in this one. Nicolai often spoke in short, caveman-like sentences peppered with modern words and phrases. And don’t get me started on the ogres. Their comical and cliche one word statements actually made me laugh while reading.
The plot was also hard to follow at times. With the various spells, memory wipes and time/world travel, I had a hard time keeping track of what was going on. And Nicolai’s ultimate mission was never resolved. I am guessing it’s going to continue on into the next book?
Despite the problems I had with this book, I am going to stick with the series. I am interested in the fates of the other siblings and in seeing what the other writers can do with these characters.
